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> Team Dark Remix, What do you think before I submit to OCR?
Wasabi J
post Aug 7 2005, 04:51 PM
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First post... Hi to all. This track is done using a simple guitar part a bud of mine did as a cover to "Team Dark's Theme", and adding drums to it. I was going for a Drum'n'bass feel to it but it evolved to something else I decided was nice.

Any critiques you have are appreciated, as I wish to make my OCRemix.org debut with it... and since those here on the Cult seem to be the target audience, I'd like to see what you have to say can be improved. No flaming/trolling, please.

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post Aug 7 2005, 08:30 PM
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post Aug 7 2005, 08:57 PM
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I'm not usually a fan of this type of music. However, the way the drums are played/sequenced/whatever makes the song something I like. Only thing I don't like is the violin. That part strikes me as a dissonant distaster, but the rest pwns.


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post Aug 7 2005, 09:23 PM
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Hmmm, it's not bad... the guitar sounded way too much like it was recorded on a microphone, and it was a bit out on sync. The drums are a little bland, but nice. I did like the violin solos, and I'd like to hear a remix which focused on those more. They were definately the best parts of this track.

I think it's ok, but I doubt it'll get past the judges at OCR, they're incredibly strict. Good work though.


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post Aug 7 2005, 10:06 PM
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post Aug 8 2005, 04:33 AM
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I used this command after 30 seconds

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meaning I didn't like it


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post Aug 8 2005, 02:20 PM
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Ok... could you be a little bit more specific, there?

Hmm... so someone doesn't like the violins and someone likes them... interesting dilemma. The guitar was done fairly hackjobbed, so its no suprise it's not one hundred percent synced. Since this is a first draft, I know it's not perfect.

OCR has turned me down before, but they said it wasn't for lack of a good song... it was due to the fact it was done entirely with E-102 sound effects, and that is apparently against a rule.

I'll wait for some more reviews if any come before I try f---in' with the sequences.

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post Oct 4 2005, 08:18 PM
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post Oct 12 2005, 09:19 AM
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Same here, I wanna listen to your work


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post Oct 12 2005, 11:42 AM
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try going to the root directory in the link.
http://jerryhunt.dmusic.com/


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post Oct 12 2005, 12:53 PM
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thx 4 the link Djbrayster

Interesting combination of violins & heavy metal, just polish the tunes a little & it'll rock IPB Image


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